The CGScholar AI Helper effectively supports students' writing development through customized AI feedback, though improvements in feedback length and language complexity are needed.
Objective: To examine the impact of the CGScholar AI Helper on 11th-grade students' writing development in English Language Arts (ELA) and explore how AI-driven feedback can support students' writing improvement.
Methods:
- Qualitative case study involving 6 students and one teacher in a diverse, low-income Midwest US school
- Students completed a 200-word writing assignment comparing two texts about Indigenous values
- Implementation of CGScholar AI Helper providing customized feedback based on teacher's rubric
- Data collection through observations, teacher post-survey, student focus groups, and writing samples
- Analysis of students' initial and revised writings using six evaluation criteria
- Use of reflexive thematic analysis for data interpretation
Key Findings:
- Five out of six students improved in at least one writing criterion
- One student improved in three criteria
- Students showed most improvement in Compare and Contrast, Compose, and Analyze criteria
- AI feedback was perceived as helpful, direct, specific, and actionable by students
- Teacher reported the tool effectively motivated students to revise their work
- Main critique was that AI feedback was too lengthy and language too complex
Implications:
- Demonstrates potential of customized AI feedback in supporting writing development
- Shows value of integrating AI tools with teacher rubrics and materials
- Suggests benefits of AI feedback particularly in large writing classes
- Highlights importance of calibrated AI use in educational contexts
Limitations:
- Small sample size (6 students)
- Incomplete data from some students (missing pre/post-surveys)
- Focus on single implementation case
- Limited to one specific writing task
- All participants were second language English speakers
Future Directions:
- Development of more concise feedback options
- Implementation of chat boxes for feedback clarification
- Enable customization of feedback length
- Conduct broader studies with larger sample sizes
- Strengthen data collection methods
- Further research on AI feedback integration in classrooms
Title and Authors: "The Impact of AI-Driven Tools on Student Writing Development: A Case Study From The CGScholar AI Helper Project" by Raigul Zheldibayeva, Ana Karina de Oliveira Nascimento, Vania Castro, Mary Kalantzis, and Bill Cope
Published On: Not explicitly stated, but references indicate 2024-2025 timeframe
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